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You have a very nice gesture on the figure and her face is quite lovely. I'm also a fan of the embroidery on her kimono - I missed all the drama about alleged art theft, so whatever, I'll assume this is your own creation and offer critique as such. ^_^
I would say pay attention to your clothing folds (they seem limp and arbitrary, especially in the sleeves) and the stylization on her ankle makes it appear broken rather than sexy. Black is a very difficult color to shade, but it looks like you dodged and burned your shadows rather than paint them. If you want some great reference for shading blacks and painting clothing, check out John Singer Sargent: [link]
Best of luck and keep arting!
(I had just seen your journal and thaought that was horrible.)
Iīm glad you liked this one anyway. Thank you sweetie!!!
Glad you liked it!!!!